Hi Maya, I've noticed your literary critiques popping up in my comments. I don't mean to be rude, I do appreciate constructive feedback, but I'm not sure I need your help to "evolve" my writing. At least not if your advice is simply what you’d personally prefer I say. I have hundreds of thousands of people reading my work. I can't tailor it to your preferences.

I am much more interested in the section I've highlighted above though. Why do you think I'm contradicting myself? What is silly about what I've said? If you're looking to contribute, and again I appreciate that, I'd much rather it was specifics about the piece than vague criticisms.